Alan O’Hashi, Whole Brain Thinker best chance blog 2025, Craft

Mastering Third-Person Limited POV in Fiction

You’re not in their head, but you’re definitely looking over their shoulder.

By Jennifer Braddock – Editor

If First Person POV is “I saw the ghost,” Omniscient is “Everyone saw the ghost.” They all had strong opinions about it. Third-Person Limited is “She saw the ghost,” and regretted reading the Latin inscription aloud.

This point of view allows you to explore one character’s experience deeply. You don’t need to commit to writing as if you are them. It’s flexible, intimate, and very popular in modern fiction, especially YA, thrillers, and literary fiction.

Definition:

Third Person Limited tells the story from an outside narrator’s perspective. It uses third-person pronouns (he, she, they). However, it is limited to the thoughts, perceptions, and knowledge of one character at a time. You’re the camera, but the lens is glued to their shoulder. The POV is best for:

  • Character-driven stories
  • Genre fiction (fantasy, romance, mystery)
  • Readers who want emotional immersion without full-on “I” narration

What Makes It Work:

  • Focused insight into a single character’s thoughts and feelings.
  • Suspense through selective revelation. Readers only know what the character knows.
  • Empathy without total immersion. You can still write in your voice while exploring theirs.
  • Flexibility to shift to other characters in different chapters or scenes. You must stay consistent within a scene.

Golden Rule of Limited:

Stick with your character’s brain. No head-hopping allowed. If you’re in Olivia’s POV, you can’t say what Jack is thinking. You can only state what Olivia guesses he’s thinking. She might be wrong, and that can be fun to play with.

  • Bad: Jack looked angry. He wanted to tell her everything, but couldn’t. (How would Olivia know that?)
  • Better: Jack looked angry. Olivia wondered if he wanted to tell her something, but his jaw stayed tight. (Much better, we’re in her head, not his.) Internal thoughts are often italicized or made clear with free indirect style: Why was he lying? He didn’t even flinch.

Already writing in First Person and want more flexibility? Third Person Limited lets you but zoom out just enough to expand the world a little. It’s like switching from GoPro to a handheld Digital Single Lens Reflex camera.

Next time, we’ll get godlike with Third Person Omniscient. We will explore what happens when the narrator knows everything. This includes the stuff the characters don’t want revealed.

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Mastering Narrative: Choosing Your Point of View

By Jennifer Braddock – Editor

Have you ever been on a road trip where the front seat passenger grabs the wheel? Someone else keeps changing the music. Meanwhile, your pal in the back seat won’t stop criticizing your every turn.

That’s what it feels like when a story hops from one Point of View (POV) to another without a license. Before you take your reader on a narrative joyride, let’s make sure you know who’s driving.

Here’s a breakdown of the most commercially successful, tried-and-true storytelling POV vehicles that publishers and readers love most.

First Person (I, me, my)

Definition: The narrator is the main character, telling the story directly to the reader.
Example: The Catcher in the Rye
Why It Sells: Instant intimacy. We feel like we’re inside the narrator’s brain.
Rules of the Road:

  • Stay in one character’s head per scene, preferably for the entire book.
  • Filter everything through their thoughts, senses, and voice.
  • Avoid describing things your narrator couldn’t possibly know (e.g., what someone else is thinking).
    Bonus Tip: Voice is everything. Even the way they describe the weather should tell us something about them.

Third Person Limited (he, she, they, filtered through one character)

Definition: The narrator is not a character but sticks closely to one of the character’s internal world per scene.
Example: The Da Vinci Code
Why It Sells: It gives the closeness of the first person. It also provides the flexibility to explore scenes your protagonist might not witness.
Rules of the Road:

  • Each scene sticks with one character’s experiences.
  • Use their language and emotional filter when describing the world.
  • Don’t head-hop. Sudden shifts in perspective confuse readers and break trust.

Third Person Omniscient (he, she, they from a godlike narrator’s POV)

Definition: The narrator knows everything and can go into any character’s thoughts, switch locations, and even comment on the story.
Example: Pride and Prejudice
Why It Sells (when done well): Epic scale, sweeping story lines, and a sense of authority.
Rules of the Road:

  • The narrator can dip in and out of minds, but does so with intention and clarity.
  • Don’t confuse omniscience with chaos. Thought transitions should be smooth and purposeful.
  • Voice matters: your narrator should have their own tone or personality.

Second Person (you, your)

Example: Choose Your Own Adventure books
Why It Sells (rarely): When it works, it’s immersive and experimental. When it doesn’t, it’s weird.
Rules of the Road:

  • Be clear who “you” is: the reader, a character, or an implied role.
  • Works best in short doses or highly stylized narratives.
  • Most traditional publishers don’t go for second person unless it’s very well done.

POV Tips

  • Be consistent. Don’t switch POVs mid-paragraph (or mid-sentence unless you’re very good).
  • Establish POV early. Don’t make your reader guess who’s talking or thinking.
  • Change scenes to change heads. If your story uses multiple POVs, give each character their own scene or chapter.
  • Don’t be a mind reader. If your POV character doesn’t know something, neither should the reader.

Choosing a point of view isn’t just about grammar. It’s about control. Like a magician’s sleight of hand, your POV determines what the reader sees, hears, and feels. Before you commit to first, third, or that odd duck known as second person, think carefully. Ask yourself: Whose head am I entering?

Next up: A deeper dive into each POV. We will provide examples and discuss pros and cons. You’ll learn how to know which one is right for your story.

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